Hey Jside Loved the real in your emotion and your choice of pacing in the very beginning. It almost started getting a bit too choppy, because the pacing was starting to feel the same but then you switched it up a bit so that was good. I liked the real you tried to put into this. You have some great things in here and you're not 100% predictable which is great. This is directable, so I might have some different choices for you - but other than some of your pacing between lines at times, this showcases some good base skills to play with - good stuff