Hey Tech Great levels on your recording. you didn't peak and you were full on let go yelling at the top. I'm glad you do switch it up a few sentences in. - but you start off at 100 and there isn't much else to go from there. It's a bit jarring upon first listening to it. Remember you can be frustrated with someone but that doesn't mean yelling THROUGHOUT will be effective. What happens is you start tuning it out after a while. It's important to have dynamics. You do take it down a bit towards the end with this nice sigh, good stuff there, but it doesn't have much dynamics outside of that. Faster, slower, louder, softer, and a variety of different emotions. So don't give it all away at the top and build more moments into the scene. We'll show you how - don't worry.