Hey Caitlin - you have so much character in your voice. I feel like you are really working hard to push the emotions of the character and i dont' think you needed to push it as far - or at least not as LONG in that same kind of yelly defensiveness that your character was experiencing. Loved however that you really saw a scene and were connecting to someone - I could tell - especially on the later half of it. You're not afraid to give it your all. DON'T BEG US TO LISTEN to your choices. Instead feel them internally and then just let them happen - cause they are great choices but just over shown to us.