Hey Randmaxe - Good acting voice. You are in a steady pace - that's your enemy in this because you are really connecting decently to the words. You don't sound like you're reading, but you stay at one steady pace in the beginning. You change it up a bit where the story changes - which is great and it's more intimate, but now it's all steady in that intimate pace. Once you learn how to create a bit more action in your scenes, you'll be able to slow them down in some parts, speed them up and others and not be all ONE SPEED throughout. Great base to work with here though.