I appreciate that you didn't start off yelling. You sound upset and involved, but don't start off at 100 - so that's a good choice. I think you did a decent job but there didn't feel like there was another person in the room - until you said DON"T GO - it felt like a one sided conversation. Allow yourself to imagine seeing their reactions, or hear them say something and allow that to continue your conversation. Much like you do when you say DON"T GO. you see them leaving - and it changes up the scene. Nice switch up there for sure. Lots of potential here - very directable. Will be interesting to hear you in a more announcer role to see your range. Not too bad - has some good moments and good choices in there