Thanks Haydarken. Very interesting...you are being very passionate here, almost desperate and pleading and I appreciate that but ALL the way through it gets redundant. It needs more change ups, so it's not all PLEADING the whole way through. And you start at GO and it just stays at that speed the entire time. Loved the sigh and that moment you took - but then right back to that same read and that same rhythm. You have some words that run together almost in a slur. This comes from now ROUNDING or articulating your mouth enough. If you work with a cork EVERYDAY horizontal in your mouth and OVER PRONUNCIATE e-v-e-r-y letter in every word (read anything outloud) this will really help work your articulators. You border on low energy so playing around with your energy levels and articulation will help considerably. 4-5 times a week - 10 min a day - take that one seriously - it will really help. And then working on placement with you *understanding where your voice is being directed too, because you border on a DENASAL sound (so perhaps you have allergies or a deviated septum or just the air pushes into your nose when you speak). I actually like your sound and unique tone but the low energy will border on bored with copy - so you just want to create ALTERNATE characters whose voices are placed elsewhere to yours. Look forward to hearing more and your range