Astralon - Fall of Order
deredbaron for Rayden, the Adventurer
The first two lines are just to get you in to the character's voice.To avoid dozens of lines, I grouped the important "shouts" to interrupt your opponent in debates in line 3. Rayden is a rather normal fellow, more often than not a little jokester, but if someone insults or hurts him or his friends, he's going to retaliate.
His voice is medium, no accent is necessary, but if you think you can give the character more "charm" with a fitting accent, feel free to try!
(Disappointed) Wait what? So, you're saying... you're human. But you're also a cat? That's gotta be the lamest transformation choice you could've made! What about a dragon?! (Referring to "Cheyll", a cat that switches to a human form at will)
(Serious) Chaos, Order, what does it matter? If you're killing off innocent people to reach your goal, you'll have to go through me first!
(Refute Argument)
That can't be right!
None of that is true!
That's not what happened!
There's just no way!
I can see the truth!(Consent)
Wait, that's it!
I agree with that!
That must be it!
You're right!(Doubt)
I don't think so!
This doesn't seem right!
Hang on a second!
Hold it right there!
I redid it to see if I could do a better job
This is a lot better, yet, the background noise is still dominant and you need to dare speaking more loudly or even shouting, to show more emotion! I'll get back to you once we're closer to the deadline and more auditions roll in.
thank you, i'll continue practicing to see how i can improve and this provides me with a good learning experince.