Serious SFM Animation (Zombies/Apocalypse)
ravlash for Main Character
I'll leave most of it to you and see what I like the most. But imagine a guy who has gone through a lot and has been worn out. Everything he loved is basically gone. The line with the realisation part is before him being so... emotionally distressed. I will have flashback moments, which requires a bit more innocence I guess. This character and every character will be a WIP
Change the lines if it fits you
"This world went to shit... Ever since the outbreak everything has gone downhill. I barely even know who I am anymore"
"Oh fuck..." (Realisation, Fear) "No no no! Oh shit... Aah! The fuck am I supposed to do now? God damnit why?! " (Angry, Fear/Sad) (Imagine shooting an innocent man by accident. Put your own spin in it/you can even rewrite it, just have a realisation and a panic moment) <Flashback moment>
"WOULD YOU STOP BANGING ON THAT FUCKING DOOR?" (Angry and/or slightly crazy)
This is very good aswell. You might have done the first line a bit to quick... no big deal really, but voice wise it's good!
Without context, I couldn't tell if I was talking to someone which would mean the lines would be delivered quicker... Or if it was like the opening to a chapter where it could be spaced out more for ambiance. Thank you for your comment and any criticism is welcome, I'm very new to this!
It was supposed to be more an inner dialogue/narration in my mind. But then again, I gave the actors free range here so it doesn't matter that much to me. That line might not be used, I just wanted to see how people would handle it. The actual lines will have more detail, unlike the audition lines. You did fine! The "panic" part could have used a bit more emotion however. Nothing that can't be fixed with a bit of work so you shouldn't worry at all!
Thank you! If I happen to get the part then I'll definitely work closely with you to make sure the emotion is there.