Make sure to change up your inflections even more at the end of the sentences so that each one doesn’t sound the same. I liked the emotion I heard come out, but you had some similar patterns throughout. Maybe you cause the destruction of the space age and are happy about it, how would that sound? As an actor were always making choices, what were yours? Always think about what you could add to a script that maybe the next person is thinking about. Nice job with powering through at the end with the mess up. It honestly felt like it was part of the script you good job of conveying that.