Lol, really solid job with your projection and energy. The energy to me is in an interesting spot; I can tell you're bringing in a lot of hype, but it still feels like you're holding a lot back at the same time. It's at a solid 70% energy at your peak, the discussion on the various plays mixed in with the crazy sound effects are fantastic! I want you to build off of a stronger and more bombastic, more PASSIONATE foundation, and then go even HIGHER for these play portions! Reaching for that 100% will go a LONG way towards capturing our attention even more. Articulation is good, the occasional trip-ups are totally normal and you recovered well by starting the sentence over. On the topic of energy, the ending doesn't feel as satisfying as the rest of the read did to me, you did a lot of stuff right in this take especially when it came to the sound effects, I would try adding more unique things like that maybe adding a big laugh somewhere in the script, just a suggestion Overall, solid work.