I like this read! You have a nice and personal voice that is soothing. I would like to hear a little more personality maybe add a smile. Right now, the read starts and ends exactly the same with little difference in-between, and while the content is fine in and of itself with the current voice, it could sound a lot more interesting and engaging. The bittersweet emotion sounds good, but instead of having the monotone emphasis throughout the take, try spicing it up with other kinds of emotion that you can employ at various phrases and words. Obviously, it should still sound natural, but that will be the best way to improve this read. More projection is also welcome, Keep focusing on that articulations make sure words don't blur together give them enough space so we can every word, I think you can achieve this just by going a bit slower. All in all good job!