Hmmmm definitely something going on here but you're good! I do think more projection would have helped you here, just a bit more volume or power to help draw in your listeners more. I think that engagement would elevate the read. "Nostertrium" was slightly mispronounced, watch out for that going forward! Articulation is good but could use more focus (usually the case for all reads). My main feedback for you is to use more emotion, because I like the sad tone, but it feels too much of "the same" to me, when I think more emotional variance would go a long way in making your read more naturally interesting. Perhaps we can chat sometime in the coming week and try to figure out what's going since some parts were hard to hear regardless good job!