I could really feel the emotion in this read! Good Job! :D

Tee hee proud of you, this is really solid I feel like this person really means something to you. Besides the parts where you stumbled, I like the fact you stopped took a breath, and restarted. Very well done there you didn't try to power through. Keep practicing that articulation I wanna hear the word "nasturtium" a little more clearly next time. Still the small adjustments you made, the giggles you had when speaking made this read feel extremely real. Keep adding things like this into your read it makes you stand out. Well done Para