We need to start out with that bombastic tone and output, and then build off of that foundation to reach even higher later on! Pacing is solid, good articulation, would recommend a little more focus on some phrases and words that were slightly blurred over. Silvianis right now it sounds like you're saying Silvianus, I know a lot of tough words in this one. Overall, good energy at the peaks, but let's increase how much emotion you're putting into your performance in all of the various parts! Try adding a laughing we referring to the character onstage and things they're doing. Overall Good stuff well done