Great job, Jose! You showcased regret very well, and I loved the whispers! The biggest differences I noticed are that your pacing isn't the same as the original, with some lines being faster or slower, and the pauses not being the same length, which leads to it both not syncing correctly with the footage, as well as a loss of some of the anticipation for each sentence. I also felt like your delivery was lacking the anger Red expresses toward his younger self, as well as some of the annoyance he feels toward the lawyer for wasting his time with a stupid question. Still, overall, a really good job!