That's ok, thanks for getting it in! Sounds like you're REALLY close to the mic, lots of plosives and breath on the mic. Nice focus and emotional affect, adapting and struggling. Like the shift from cruel to desperate, with some nice spontaneity and imperfections relatable to how you're presenting the world as you imagine it happening in real time. Well paced and adaptive. Wouldn't be mad at some furthering of each extreme emotion at least for a moment but solid emotional work in here.