[YMDS] Paranatural Comic Dub
naruruna for Zoey
Young, childish voice. Sorta tom-boyish but not overly so.
[matter-of-factly to Max's bickering] Well, I think it's kinda cool. My friends are gonna be jealous 'cause I'll be able to get candy and stuff whenever I want to.
[leering/sorta sassy] You tryin' to make me mad, Maxie-boy!?
[Excitement of moving into a new home] HWOAH!! I'm going 'splorin!
Not bad. My only feedbacks would be that you need to work a bit on ennuciating, it doesn't have to be precise and it can be an acting choice but it didn't feel natural like a kid's, it wasn't a huge deal either. The other thing would be your emotional range. Especially your 3rd line, you're really holding back. It feels like it may be because of the voice you're using. Don't hold back, especially with lines with "excitement". Otherwise not bad.
Oh alright, the lack of excitement is totally my fault (auditioning at 3am was not my wisest choice), I think I'll try again and maybe work on how clear my words come out, I just wasn't sure how articulate a child could be. Thank you for the feedback I'll try to accommodate C: .