Thanks! Yes some peaking in sc 1, the louder you're going to be; lower the gain and give more space from the mic. Also sfx wouldn't be done by the talent (like the hitting sound at end) but strong affected work. Sc2: some great guilt and sorrow affect in here. Some clarity and pace challenges that make it feel a bit staccato at times, but they are struggling in this so some struggle is understandable.