Good capture to keep the biggest parts from peaking, the overall recording is very quiet tho. Sometimes doing the loudest parts separate or riding the gain level down when doing the biggest parts and back up post can be another way to capture (like an engineer would do in studio live while you're working). SC1: Nice focus and pace. Great struggling. 18s feels a little off, like you just lost your spot for a moment. SC2: contrite work :) nice remorse and affected, focussed delivery. Especially since this is all lower, raise the gain or get a bit closer to mic for more robust capture.