this has a better personality than your last one. You are doing a fantastic job taking my direction here - just now don't feel that gap has to be as big between your first and last name but instead play with saying trenise one way and then west another. Have some fun with it for the next one. Thank you for remembering to slate as well. This is a beautiful smile and warmth in your slate so good work there. LOVE YOUR SARCASM. thank you - great work. And thanks for recognizing the terrible script formatting and knowing what to read. GOOD work. Okay celebrity cruises is fine. You have a nice warm smiley voice and in narration - this is the voice that will make the most money likely - however I would love to hear you in more playful things - I know you are a hard worker and will do it RIGHT but that's not something I need to teach you. I want to stretch you a bit and get you out of your safety net. You are going to SHINE in your hard working NORMAL read - don't get me wrong, but if I stretch you a bit more to not be SO PERFECT in your choices, we'll get even better reads out of you - you'll see. FLAT - this needs a bit of work to grasp it. I hear you ALMOST there but there is a bit of rhythm/change ups in the MAKE THEM, SHARE THEM, etc. it goes UP in vocal, down, down....so it's not flat - but you're almost there. This will need a bit more understanding of the character to get. LOVE the whisper - nice choice.