Hey Ryan - thanks so much for putting your name in the comments - so helpful for me. glad you liked the scripts. Like that you started off kind of calm and then built up in the scene. Good work for the most part. some parts you sound a bit like your begging for just a bit too long - it's a great choice but not to over play it. With a bit of direction this would be a really good scene for sure for you. Love that you're not afraid to emote and go there. Lots to work with here. Thank you