Love that you boyfriend agreed with me - that's awesome. Hy kyra - thanks so much for submitting for me. Loved that you chose to laugh where you did in the beginning there. That was a great choice and I like what you're trying to do with the character. Loved that you took me on a journey of emotions - but SPEED is your enemy - it's okay for a moment to be really speedy but it almost compromises what you're saying so just be careful with that. It will feel too slow for you but trust me, it will be right when it's a bit uncomfortable. I have to ALWAYS remind myself to slow down - so will you. Love that you're willing to go there and that you know to change it up. Great base to work with. Look forward to more