Not sure why, but I performed it with a desperate anger.

Thanks for pointing out your reaction this as DESPERATE ANGER - I get why you said it. It would be brilliant in a couple spots but not throughout. You have good ears as that's how it comes across for sure. Again would love bits of this but just not all the way through - and that's what this semester is all about. We will go through a journey of emotions and play with how to change it up more with purpose - you like to give of yourself and that's great to hear. lots to work with and good ear.