I like your tone at the start, not entirely angry but it felt more bewildered. In that part, your pauses have the same length so it gets a bit rhythmical. I do love the second part where you actually break that way more often. There it's the opposite; I think your tone could be way more panicky, but the pacing was stronger. Good job, Hurrisen!

Thanks! No need to hope it'll all work in one run through. Even a flub isn't a reason to start over; pause redo the broken part and keep going, knowing that in front of a client or on your own that it's the right choice so you have the pieces to edit together and that perfect" doesn't even exist. The more this stays the same/repetitive feeling, the less IRL and authentic it starts to become. When listening back ask; "have I given that expression already? Is it based on something I can react to right now/moment by moment, or am I TRYING to achieve a delivery, more than accomplish a goal?" Nice work.