I love the anger (especially that repressed swearword) at the start, the emotional breakpoint and that sad, quiet ending. The pauses felt really natural to me and you did a good job cycling through different emotions. Good work Wade!

Right on, thanks Wade. Glad for this writeup too. Powerful work, well paced and adapting. Great emotional vulnerability and some nice varied expression. A bit peaked in the first 1/4 but not too bad, just for your own future capture/mic technique optimization. Love the life sounds/sniffles and evolving tact and focus. Solid!

Great work Wade! Love the emotion and the tone.