Hey Kevin - thanks so much for giving me your all. You've got a nice start but you kind of grab a few words and really push them - not always but in the beginning a few times and it came off great at first but then repeated too much - but you didn't keep doing that later so good job on that. I like that you're really trying to be there in the scene. There are some change ups which are good. The F bomb for me - is great - i'm good with it, but just know other decision makers might not be so use a beep or human sfx to go over top of it as it is a great choice but not all of them like swears so you can cover your tracks that way. For me though - if it works with the scene and not over done - I'm great with it. Lots to work with here. A good base - look forward to more.