Hey Vachance. Thank you so much for your notes. Good job on your efforts for your articulation. I agree - i think you have a happy medium here. It's not too over articulate and its not too fast at all. The pacing is good but it needs more change ups in speeds so the scene moves more. You will also add more reaction sounds to whom you're speaking with (imagine them talking back to you in parts) and you will add more human qualites (all things we will work on) and you will have a really UNIQUE SOUND. you could voice for female, male and non-binary - that gives you more opportunities so over time working on characters like this would be super smart. Can't wait to hear all you have in you.