Your voice is pretty modest, towards the soothing side and I liked hearing the inflexions slowly coming into it! Maybe it could have been more extreme? My main critique would be that the pacing is way too consistent, with same length pauses. I think would really help the narrative to switch those up. Great job regardless!

No worries, we're all evolving our spaces :) Nice vulnerability without too much melodrama. Great pace and focus, with in real time adapting. Strong start to our semester together!