Thank you very much for auditioning. what to start off by saying this was a solid audition. the second line was very well done. your voice as a natural chill to it, that makes it ideal for these types of roles. but natural talent isn't everything. I loved the line very much, but for this character, it needs to come off a little slower and more creepier, think of a yandere when saying this line. I hate to put it like that, but that's the best way from me to describe it. the first line was good, but I believe you can do better. you have it in you to do it, this line needs to have hatred, pain and mockery in it. in this scene Saeran is basically talking to the one person he loved the most in this world and feels abandoned and betrayed by them. so what was once love in his heart has now turned to hatred. there two types of crazies, the ones who are born crazy and those who became crazy. internal and external causes. Searan happens to fall under the latter. he started out good, but due to his childhood of being abused by his mother and being hunted by his father. then he gets kidnapped, tortured, brain-washed and experimented on for years. so now in present time. he's a hacker, assassin and a whole cocktail of drugs crazy. but deep down, there is a very small part of him, that is still sane. that's the kind of voice he needs. I know I'm asking for a tall order, but I really really believe you can delivery on that.