Thank you for auditioning again, this was another solid audition, the second line is not a problem at all, the first line however, even though it was good, but imagine if you will this, you like to have fun with your friends and you know that a two of them are in the process of trying to date each other, you notice them getting really comfortable and they lean into each other about to kiss and then *poof* you pop up and say the first line. I hope this helps you. while I'm at it, for the second line, think of this. You're a computer hacker and a spy. you love someone, very much, who is being pursued by another computer hacker who has a vendetta against you and knows that you're in love with this person as well as knowing where she lives. you planed for such a thing and had a bomb planted in the house, but that backfires when the hacker hacks into the system and enables the bomb to go off whenever they want. so now the only way to save her is to go to her house and fix the system, added to the fact the person who wants you dead, is a sibling whom you thought to be living a good life, only to find out that they're not only far worse and damaged, but they blame you for it. so you've got a lot on your plate, but at the same time, you then find out that the person you love, loves you back and wants to be with you. so now you're in a house that is rigged to go off, agonizing over finding being Reunited with your beloved sibling who wants you dead and is trying to kidnap the person you love, and the person you love trying to get close to you. but you can't let that happen even though you secretly want it to happen. so I hope this helps you with your lines^^ I look forward to hearing what you come up with^^