Thanks! No worries, best takes can be hard to get each week. 1: Huge disgust/nausea waves, well done. Very playful take with external emotional representation. Nice pace and focus. A little one-note, but a good one to explore. Strong work. 2: So sad <3 very affecting. Really nice emotional vulnerability and life sounds/sniffles. Some great affects in here and while you might be focussing a lot on the external sounds and affects, there is lots to be proud of here. For added realism; consider who exactly you're talking to in each scene and talk TO them, looking in your minds eye to how they are reacting while you tell them it. Should help ground you more in reacting than planning, and the internal real emotions are often enough for natural representation. You do the external rehearsals till you feel it inside and you let it out, without forcing it. You'll have even stronger realism. Well done.