Thanks Znafz 1: Great character voice and pace. A little off voice by the middle, hard to keep it as consistent as the 1st part so maybe you settle on that type of offering closer to how it was by the middle for consistency. Or work in the 1st part of it (if not hurting) and try and keep the posture or placement you need for it and strengthen that part of you :) It prob gives you more emotional and expression from the latter voice tho 2: Great pace again, well done. Nice focus and emphases. Great writeup and work here. Varies and feels spoke TO someone and the smile voice and shift to more positivity is lovely here.