Shouldn't We Be Wearing Helmets? (A Short Silly Original Animations by KiwiToons)

mya stea for Younger sister

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Voice Actor
Younger sister
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Role assigned to: buckets

innocent, impressionable, wants to be just like her older sister

  • Hey Sis, shouldn't we be wearing helmets?

    Huh! You forgot to get them?

    Oh. He he [cute laugh]

  • [worried] Oh, my gosh, my hair! Does it look as bad as it feels?

    [relieved] Well, OK. I guess that might work.

  • [joking] So today is the day that I turn into a rebel like you, sis? He he [cute laugh]

    [pouting] Humph! [ pronounced ˈhəm(p)f ]

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Shouldn't We Be Wearing Helmets? (A Short Silly Original Animations by KiwiToons)
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kiwitoons

Since you asked me to give you some feedback here it is... I thought that you did an especially good job in capturing the youth, energy, and spirit of the little sister. I like that you really acted out the roles and tried to understand both of the characters. I also like your phasing of the words with strategic pauses and the use of inflections to spice things up. The only suggestion I have is on the first line... "Hey Sis, shouldn't we be wearing helmets?" the sss sound on "Sis, shouldn't and helmets" could have a little less emphasizes. Overall, I thought you did excellent.

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