you nailed it!!!

Powerful piece, good choice/challenge. Great focus and adapting, life sounds and exertions a plenty! Good emotional affect on the delivery. Some areas are deviating a bit but not in negative ways, just as I hear it. "look officer" Down intonation on original, upward ending on yours. Not a big deal. The voice on "deputy", "save my life" after that are getting a little underpowered/cracking, but that's just nit picking. Really solid choice and work here.