Hey Clair. Great job on working on your clarity. that will still be a focus for us, however we also have to be careful that it doesn't put you into a READ. It feels like you are struggling to read this out - so we just need to find a way to work with your delivery with more personality. What i hear here is someone working hard to get this right and that is good however it takes away from the real. You are a bit tricky in that we have an accent we have to work around and I think you're a bit reserved in your personality, so pulling out your crazy and risks is going to be my focus with you. I'm torn as I want to direct you to just not worry so much about the clarity and just focus on having fun with the copy- HOWEVER the clarity does struggle so we need you to work on it. Catch 22 here. I love your hard work and can't wait to hear your growth. Perhaps on the next read for me - try and have more fun with it and don't work so hard to get it Right in clarity. I might be wrong in this direction, but just want to hear what that sounds like for you. This could afford more playfullness and dynamics (which is what most of us need at this point) so I can't wait to hear you get out of your comfort zone. Thanks for playing Clair. Looking forward to more