I do like your "carsales-y" style! I interprets two points different from your read. #1, the first two words "Get connected!", I think it is one sentence with exclamation mark, so I have a stress and pause after the sentence. It seems that you interpreted it as a noun. Probably can verify with Deb~ #2, it seems that your energy is a bit lower for the last few numbers. I feel it would be great to keep it the energy level or even stronger since it is ended with an exclamation mark. Overall, I love the energy and clearness.

Great notes here. I agree. You have a BEAUTIFUL high energy and as you said, you know how to get there. But I also agree that it could use a bit more genuine. As we work on this semester we will guide you into more dynamics. Can't wait to hear you intimate - just because you are so powerful in your voice. I didn't walk away from this worried about your sibilance so that's a good thing. You're thorough in your critique as well which tells me might look for perfection so I will focus on teaching you that imperfection can be so powerful as well. EVERYTHING is about meaning your words - no matter whether it's a big read or intimate, so just adding more personal opinions and emotions and playing with dynamics (softer, louder, faster, slower etc) will also help to give us more range in that great vocal of yours. Glad you know your strengths and some decent insight into your weaknesses so thank you for giving us all such a nice engagingly bright energy. We'll add more layers as we go and you are going to rock. And if less is more is hard for you, then I'm just the right teacher to bring it out. I had that problem initially too so I know how to adjust it. Takes time but it's great to know how to go big and little. Good stuff