Hey dude! Nice energy! I do just love your natural voice and accent. Now, something I have been told is that just because there is a comma or a punctuation mark, doesn't mean there needs to be a full stop. When we speak normally, we often breeze through them, or create spaces in other spots where you wouldn't think there would be if it was written out. I feel like in this read some of your spaces were too long in an attempt to emphasis and separate ideas. To me it came off as unnatural at times. That was the biggest thing I heard from this read. Nice job though man! Keep it up!

Hey Aaron Thank you so much for your read. I can tell that articulation is a big focus for you - it's great that you are focusing on articulation, but it really takes away from a natural delivery. Your energy is great and you have a fun voice actual, so I'd love to push you into having more fun and not focus as hard on articulation. I can't wait to hear your growth as we work more on meaning our words vs saying them RIGHT. I can tell you are a hard worker and want to get it right - which is great but it can leave us with a sense of READING instead of relaying information that the character is passionate about. Again I hear a great energy here - love the excitement in your voice, now we just have to work on emoting (which is what this whole course is all about). You will see such HUGE growth through this program. You have a great quirkiness. I can't wait to hear more of it. Thanks for putting in such great efforts here.