if the pitch is to deep i can do a redo

Hey Orange - be careful not to force your voice too low (as you do here). When you do, it becomes your "bedrock", so to speak - the tone where you cannot reach further down. Here all your words are being spoken, and it sounds way too flat. If you really need to go this low, use more air when you speak (but don't blow it into the mic). You won't be able to speak in long sentences, but you can get deeper that way.