Thank you so much my friend - Loved your emotion here - you were definetly meaning what you are saying but you can afford more human qualities. You had the passion but everything was on point to the script - so adding sounds like you are thinking about what to say next would really help this - I'll demonstrate tonight as I don't know how John shared this with you so I'll make sure to make my points so that you have the right idea. You had great dynamics here though so I loved that.