STAR WARS: KENOBI - Revitalized
ZariphExp2410 for The Fifth Brother
An intimidating presence, the Fifth Brother Inquisitor is tasked to hunt down Force-sensitive survivors. A man of few words, he uses his powerful physicality and brute strength to pry leads from cowering citizens, leading to the capture of elusive Jedi. Trained in the dark side of the Force, he wields a dual-bladed lightsaber, reveling in the opportunity to destroy rebels and Force-wielders alike.
- english
You are too impulsive.
You know why we are here. There is a Jedi hiding on this planet. We need to know where he is. You will be rewarded well.
Kenobi cannot hide forever. We will snuff him out.
You said you were looking for feedback. First, I just want to say that I thought that the acting was good, so nice job. My constructive feedback is that 1. I can hear clicking and and floor noise inbetween the lines, so I would recommend muting the areas where you're not speaking (if you use audacity like me, you can use its editing to do this.). 2. I can hear the mic booming a bit, the most noticeable spot being when you say "planet". This may just be a mic quality issue, but I'd look into finding a way to fix that. That's my feedback. Have a nice day and God bless!