VA 201 - Class 7 Homework Portal
Andrea for Role for VA 201 - Class 7 Homework Portal
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Hey Andrea - thanks for caring - Okay you had some decent stuff in anger for sure and gave me organic so thank you. I loved that you used your high range and your normal range. Watch that you don't do the same thing over and over - such as your first three lines - they all have the same feel, weight/high pitch - so just know that it's super strong once, but three times in a row takes away from the clever of it but I loved that you changed it up after - you have the right idea. Fear is okay - the problem is that it stays in a similar place of flat fear in the beginning. I LOVED when you said they got me surrounded. It felt the most organic in that scene. While you were trying to instill fear through tears, it felt forced. Loved disgust - loved the real and the reactions in it . Great job here. loved it