[YMDS] Paranatural Comic Dub
clairbear for Zoey
Young, childish voice. Sorta tom-boyish but not overly so.
[matter-of-factly to Max's bickering] Well, I think it's kinda cool. My friends are gonna be jealous 'cause I'll be able to get candy and stuff whenever I want to.
[leering/sorta sassy] You tryin' to make me mad, Maxie-boy!?
[Excitement of moving into a new home] HWOAH!! I'm going 'splorin!
Not bad, your voice fits well with the character, but I'm not a fan of your mic quality. What type of mic are you using? Also, when it came to your read, your inflections were way too "0-100 in 4 seconds" kind of deal. Like you need to keep it more consistent overall, and just be more genuine. You are welcomed to reaudition, I will give you another critique then as well.
With your reads, line 2 was the most solid. Line 3 was the one that needed the most work. Just be excited throughout the line. Line 1, you needs to be just happy. Zoey isn't being thoughtful about potential of candy and friends, she's just innocently stating it matter-of-factly.
Sounds good! I'll reaudition soon! Thanks for the awesome words. <3
Microphone: Logitech G230 (Getting a more proffesional microphone soon! Hopefully you can bare with me till it comes in the mail!) Thanks for the kind words. I'll be making my reaudition right now as I'm writing this. I'll submit a better read thanks to your words from earlier. Thank you for being so kind!