Practically perfect. Altho there was mouth noise, it was an acceptable amount. It was maybe a bit too soft-spoken, especially, in the beginning, but bonus points for successfully demonstrating two distinctly different accents.
Listening to your audition again, you could vary the volume of your voice to add even more emphasis. Also, altho it is hard to ascertain from only three words spoken by Ichabod, perhaps you could use additional practice character acting, which this project can provide you w/.
Hi. Thank youfor both your compliment and your advice. Is there an additional more character acting heavy audition line you would like for me to read?
Not unless you want to give a Jewish/Yiddish accent a go. I would be happy to have you join the cast, either way.
Ha...yeah that might be a bit out of my wheelhouse. Thank you so much for the offer. What would be the next step?
Are you ok w/volunteering your voice ? We all do this in exchange for exposure. The next step would be for me to find something I feel would be suitable for your sound and challenge you.
The Brown Paper Cowboy by Robert Rodriquez. A bunch of good old boys were sitting around the Neutered Bull Saloon one Saturday night,swapping whoppers and windies and stretching the blanket to it's limits and then some. The evening was filled with yarns about scrapes with outlaws,memorable cattle drives,unusual weather,and encounters with grizzly bears. As the evening's narrative festivities continued,everyone wanted to get in on the tales being swapped. It finally came the turn of a grizzled old fellow who'd been sitting in the corner,hardly saying a word or three,till at last prompted by several of the more boisterous members of the crowd,he was finally convinced to tell a tale of his own. In his younger days,he'd been a saloon keeper during the halcyon and glory days of the Virginia City silver strike immediately after the Civil War. It happened that one night,just as the saloon was about to close,in walked a fellow garbed in the oddest outfit anyone could imagine. He wore a brown paper Stetson hat,a brown paper vest,a brown paper shirt,brown paper trousers,brown paper boots,a pair of brown paper holsters containing two pistols made of brown paper,and he carried a brown paper lariat which he constantly twirled in the air to the utter amazement and glee of the delighted crowd,and every time he ordered whiskey,he drank it out of a brown paper cup. Nobody quite ever remembered his name,but folks just started calling him the Brown Paper Cowboy because of his unusual apparel. Night after night,for about a month,he'd come into the saloon just after sundown and the crowds came from near and far just to look at him. Pretty soon the saloon had gained a real reputation as a gathering place to see the Brown Paper Cowboy. And then,just as mysteriously as he'd come,he dropped out of sight to the utter disappointment of folks all around Virginia City. For months thereafter, folks would come to the saloon hoping for his return, but no such luck. About a year later,almost to the date of his last appearance, a small crowd was gathered in the saloon one night,still wondering what had become of the Brown Paper Cowboy,when a tall lanky cowpoke,a Texan by his manner and appearance, said that he had some real sad and distressing news or the folks who were wondering about the Brown Paper Cowboy. The Texan had been in El Paso the month before and had been there the day the Brown Paper Cowboy had been tried,convicted,and hung by the local authorities. Hung! The crowd was stunned into silence and disbelief. "No! How could that happen? Why did they hang him?" they asked,as if in one voice. "Simple," the Texan said. "What else: RUSTLING!!"
Please let me know if you like that one and send you the formatted script.
I love it. I will send you a private message which contains my email address.
I don't know if I told you or not, but yours was among the winning auditions.
If you message me your PayPal address, I will pay you your reward.
Wow, thank you so much, both for the opportunity and recognition. I will message you privately about paypal.