Black Market Brawl: Movement III - Sui Generis
Carlo Deniega for Electro
17 years old. A human boy with the power to discharge electricity from his fingers. Having been sheltered and reliant on his brother his whole life, Electro was ill-prepared for the dangers wandering throughout the Din. After being fortuitously saved by Achilles Breaker, he has resolved to become her apprentice so that he may learn strength and bravery himself. With his newly acquired rapier and prosthetic nose, he's ready to impress his new mentor! …While she struggles to maintain some emotional distance.
He's got some ways to go, but bless him, he's trying.
While you may not be the focus of later episodes, your presence will be a RECURRENT one.
(proudly)
SHE'S Achilles Breaker, and I'M Circuit Breaker! And together, we're… THE BREAKERS!
(answering a question)
Actually, I lost it to an—um… I'm not sure WHAT it was. Some vampire… flying… nose thing? Uhh, long story.
(nervous but with bravado)
I-it's okay! We'll… we'll make it out of this safely! I promise!
Thank you so much for trying out! Every audition is appreciated! This is a great amount of energy present throughout all your takes for Electro, I love it! Something about the way line 2 was handled had me gigglesnorting, not sure why. It just felt very real in the moment. You actually sounded somewhat scared for line 3, which is 100% the point! Really sounds like a teen boy just trying to do whatever he can--first to be impressive, and trying to maintain impressions as things go further down the slope. I also listened to your take for a Golden Hand, and it sounds distinguished enough from your Electro. You seem like the type of person who can digest what a character's tonally like with just a good look at the lines. Well done!
I really appreciate you giving me feedback, thanks!
Update: My discord is now Carlo D#9139