I quite like the voice you picked for Percival, but there are a couple problems that are conflicting my decision. While the pitch and tone of your voice are almost exactly what I need, you have a certain awkwardness on certain words. You seem hesitant to get in character, if that makes any sense. I usually experience this problem when Im scared that my neighbors will hear me saying lines. The other issue is your mic quality. From the sounds of it, it's a built-in mic. I would suggest getting a headset, at least. I recommend Turtle Beach, X12, P12, etc. I have a Turtle Beach Recon currently, and it's doing wonders for me. Theyre around 50-80 dollars at Walmart, just go in the video games section. You should find it there. Primarily, they're for gaming, but I find that they have wonderful recording capabilities as well. Just make sure to get one with a USB. Anyways, that's a seasoned veteran's advice for you. I didn't want to drag it on too long, so... I hope this helps you. Sorry about the rant, lol.