Really really nice audition! So far you are the closest to the voice I have pictured for Frederick! One thing I would suggest is for the first line, to put a little more hesitation on the line. The context for it is Blaine (his older brother) is questioning why Frederick is being so uptight and wanting to leave the Pastel Palace. The reason is Frederick mistook Jamie as the princess he was supposed to marry, soon to find out it was actually Gwen. He finally snapped once his brother kept questioning why he didn't want to be there anymore, and by the middle "is...", he was hesitant to say it, but then finally snapped and he shouted it out. I would also say to say "REALLY UGLY!!!" just a liiiitle bit slower, but not by much to give it a more authentic feel. As for the second line, you read it right, but, all that it missed was the hesitation after "because...". He is about to admit he actually likes Gwen for the first time, and with that emphasis it would really bring the line out more and make it the way it was supposed to! Other than that, you did amazing! Well done and good luck!