Hi! I know the "Let me know if..." part wasn't directed at me, but I wanted to give my take on this audition. I would want to hear feedback if it were me. I feel like you're coming across as a little bored, like you're reading the stocks page of the newspaper to someone. This is a guy who's just ascended to near-godhood. If I had done that, I'd be pretty excited. We can't know exactly what the director is looking for, but I went at it with a "Fools! I'll show them all!" kind of energy. I did feel some emotion in parts of your audition, so I know you can do it! As a rule for animation, things are larger than life, so go big! Good luck!
Oh, I appreciate any kind of feedback! Thank you so much for yours! I agree, I'm working on adding more energy into my lines. I am definitely going to keep that in mind!
I actually quite enjoyed the way you did the last line. Whesker absolutely despises Chris and I really felt that at the end.