Session 9
Shoham Orzach for Role
Full details of homework is on Closing Credits
Nice slate my friend. Loved just your first name - you didn't even need your last name in that one - the main reason is you made the same choice twice - do something different with your last name instead - or just your first name would have been awesome. So proud of your efforts here. Great job on adding layers to the scene. Sam and casey are distinctly different which is AWESOME. Sam is a bit SLOW which you need to do - so they are different but be caredful he feels like he is so slow that it comes across disjointed or fake. Then later on it sounds a bit more regular you vs Sam - but i think you voiced the two characters separately - which I love - so great job on that - really helped. This is a fantastic effort from you. Casey was super strong - great character. I think you made stellar choices here - we can hear some of your choices with Sam so it feels a bit disingenuous but I know your choices were awesome so proud of that - just needs some direction - but keep trying stuff like this....it will keep growing. You are getting better and better all the time.