Awesome on the slate Jonathan - thank you - Nice choice on the opening for the cap - but it was a bit repetitive - lOVE The idea of this and that you're speaking while you're struggling - but it had the same staccato rhythm......Loved that i knew the difference between the two characters and they each had their own paces and personalities - I love that - you had this sing song rhythm for Sam which I actually liked but not in EVERY single line - it became two voices - not two personalities in a scene. HOWEVER i loved the distinct difference between the two of them but the scene itself needs more layers - where are they? What is happening? What can you feed the animator? Adding more layers to this and more actionable moments will help build even more to what you are doing here. Great base - just needs some additional layers to the characters and to the scene itself.