Heya Andrastae! It's great to hear from you again! So first of all, let me just say that I am really happy to see that both your recording quality and your performance has improved quite a bit since the Blue Star audition. I knew you had great potential, but your quality and stiffness was holding you back. You've very obviously overcome that stiffness, and worked toward getting better quality - honestly, I listened back to your audition for Liara, and I barely even recognize it compared to this! I'm so excited for you in that capacity. So, firstly, praises: I'll get the easy one out of the way, and say that your recording quality is incredibly crisp and clear. Moving on, I love the breathy tone you have for Nualia, that slight air-suck and drawl as she speaks is perfectly what I had in mind. Your performance of the horny lines is spot-on, too - definitely gives the impression that she doesn't want to be left waiting any longer! The condescension in the first line is pretty pat, too. My personal favorite is the delivery of that very last line - the sucking in of air for that "Fuck" is just delicious! The speech pattern and decanter is just overall spot on, too. Critiques: Honestly, my biggest critique is in that hint of British. I'm not sure if your natural accent is British, but it feels a bit... off to me. A bit forced (either forcing too much British accent, or forcing the accent down too much). It's definitely not a deal-breaker, but when I listened through your audition a few times trying to find places to improve on, this was really the only big one that jumped out at me. The only other possible point of contention I can think of is maybe a little bit more nuance in volume and tone. Your first line is a little bit on the monotone side, and given her description of being soft-spoken, eloquent, and noble-raised, combined with the minimal direction for the line, that DOES make sense. But I think she could do with just a bit more expression: in the first line, she's putting on a show, wrapping that silly little human around her finger. I imagine her pacing around him in a slow circle, swinging her hips with each step, maybe putting a little bounce on each footfall so her chest jiggles a bit, as she gently runs a finger across his shoulders, eyelids lowered and lips upturned in a smug, almost-shit-eating grin. If you were to try that line again, I would go for a hint more playfulness, with that more aptly-described scene in mind. But honestly, those are the only real criticisms I have for you. Everything else is ace. Thank you so much for taking the time to audition!

I was already super hyped when I saw that you made another project and I really thank you for the whole praise :) I have a nice new microphone too and I have learned to not be so "tightened up" when recording, your critique from earlier helped a lot, it made me improve! Yeah, I am originally from Austria and I got taught british english, I already tried to let go of it in the first sentence but sometimes I may force it too much, you are right( I can hear it now)- I will try to stick to a normal accent! Gonna do that first line again and show it to you in a new audition here! Again, thank you so much for listening and for being honest!